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"Mama, I’ll be good," the little
girl whispered. She clung to her mother's legs. "I didn’t mean to fall in
the water, I promise I won't do it again." She looked up, her mother's
face shadowed by her cloak hood. The winter's night air wrapped around her legs
and she shivered. Confusion whirled in her mind. They whispered about her fall
into the water at the bath house. "Mama, someone pushed me, don't you
believe me?"
Arms circled her shoulders as her
mother dropped to her knees. "Oh, Dominica," her mother sobbed
against her. "One day I hope you'll understand." She buried her face against her mother. The
sweet smell of rosewater filled her nose. Her mother's scent.
"She will be safe, Brother. I give
you my word." The senior Vestal nodded her promise to the little girls
father. "No one will touch her inside the temple."
"I know, Sister." Her father
nodded. The little girl saw tears in his eyes. "Dominica, it's time. Kiss
your mother," he ordered in a voice that cracked as he spoke.
"But I promise," the little
girl sobbed as her father pulled her away from her mother. "I'll be
good!" Her scream echoed against the side of the temple. Her father
squeezed her one last time and pushed her into the outstretched arms of the
Vestal Priestess.
"Hush, now, child," the
Vestal whispered into her ear.
"No! Mama! Papa! Don't leave
me!"
Heartbreaking...
ReplyDeleteApril, this is so emotional. I'd love to have you stop by my blog and add your link to my "Teaser Tuesday" meme. Thanks for sharing your writing!
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Thanks ladies! I'll head over to your blog now Nancy!
ReplyDeleteThat's heart breakingly sad.
ReplyDeleteGoosebumps again! Love that scene, girl!
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