She's 8.
Why didn't I have this type of foresight when I was 8? Or hell, 30 for that matter?!???
Okay, it's Teaser Tuesday and I decided to drop in a few lines from the piece I wrote for Nano back in November. I surpassed the 50,000 words and set the idea aside and haven't looked at it since. At some point, it needs serious revision....
Don't forget to drop by Krystal Shannan's page for her teaser! It's a great one!!!!!
(excerpt from The Rebel Spy)
“What the hell is going on here?” General Steele
demanded angrily as he broke through the undergrowth. Light from the moon
filtered through the trees. He assessed the scene with one sweeping gaze. His
soldiers had happened upon a woman in the forest. They now had her pinned
securely to the ground.
“Sir, we’ve found a rebel.” Waxman sneered at the
woman beneath him.
General Steele lifted a brow. Blood stained the
front of Waxman’s shirt.
“It’s a spy, sir.” Waxman’s accomplice added.
Tompkins didn’t look any better. His eye was already beginning to swell closed.
“Looks more like you’ve found a hell cat.” General
Steele chuckled. The little rebel had obviously thrown a few good punches
before his men had managed to wrestle her to the ground.
“We found this on her.” Tompkins held out the
letter. The sobs of a child floated out of the trees and Knowles appeared. A
squirming red headed girl held tightly in his arms.
“I heard her crying, Sir.” Knowles reported.
The young woman on the ground renewed her struggles
with the appearance of the little girl.
“Be still, bitch,” Waxman hissed as her feet pounded
against him. He shifted and pressed his knee into her back more deeply.
“Let her up, Waxman.” General Steele ordered.
“But, Sir,” Waxman protested.
“Let her up, now.” General Steele pressed his lips
together and leveled a hard stare at the angry soldier. It wasn’t the first
time Waxman was slow to obey an order. He nodded for Knowles to let the little
girl go. The tiny girl immediately ran to where her mother was pushing up off
the ground.
“Mama,” she sobbed against her mother’s skirts.
General Steele motioned again, this time for
Tompkins to hand him the letter. The seal had been broken. He unfolded it and
read silently.
“Bring them back to camp.” General Steele ordered
softly. He tucked the letter into his jacket pocket.
Love this story!
ReplyDelete